PEOPLE SHOULD BE ALLOWED TO MARRY THE SAME
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Do you think people should be criticised based on their sexuality?
In my opinion people are who they are and can love who they want without being judged about it. Other people shouldn’t have a say, they shouldn’t be criticised and they are good influences.
Other people shouldn’t have a say about someone else's sexuality. Could you imagine just for a minute if you had other people having a say in your relationship whilst not knowing them. A group of young men began harassing them (Chris and Melania Geymonat) when they discovered the women were a couple, asking them to kiss while making sexual gestures.Same sex couples are being harassed by people they don’t even know because they date the same gender.
Throughout the years same gender couples are being criticised for being true to themselves. Same sex couples shouldn't be criticised. Laws worldwide which discriminates against same sex couples on the basis of who they love should stop. Someone shouldn't be judged for being true to them self and being who they really are.
Influence, which means the capacity to have an effect on the character, development, or behavior of someone or something, or the effect itself. There aren't always going to be negatives about same sex couples, there are going to be positives about it even if you don't want to believe it. First of all, the impact on same sex couples and their families has been positive and profound.
People should be able to love whoever they want and be with them without being criticised based on their sexuality. "Same-sex couples are not asking for special treatment. They are asking for equal treatment. They are asking to be accountable, as a couple, in a community". - Bishop Gregory Rickel
"Being gay is not a crime and it is not a sin. Stop using God to justify your prejudice. Religion is about loving one another. You're just looking for an excuse to hate".
- Nihaan Singh Rajput
The only way we can accomplish this is by taking charge and speaking out to help give same sex couples get the rights they definitely deserve!
"Being gay is not a crime and it is not a sin. Stop using God to justify your prejudice. Religion is about loving one another. You're just looking for an excuse to hate".
- Nihaan Singh Rajput
The only way we can accomplish this is by taking charge and speaking out to help give same sex couples get the rights they definitely deserve!
Something I want to start with is there are some words that are grey and some are black and it is quite distracting but anyway, I agree with your views and think couples of the same gender should be allowed to get married, I was married to Nathan but we sadly divorced on his birthday due to him buying a suit from the dollar shop, I'm getting off topic so yes this was a great essay and I don't see too much wrong with it so GOOD WORK, btw this is from Kaiden A.K.A KidSwaggerDude66
ReplyDeleteGreat post, Nelly! You have a rhetorical question and have an introduction that sets up your argument.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading the quotes that you provided near the end.
You could improve your paragraph on influence. It seems like you might have copy-pasted a few of those sentences. You say they are a good influence - you should spend some time explaining this in your writing.